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Are You Listing All the Benefits You Offer? (Part 2)

[Dalya’s Note: This is an excerpt from my award-winning book Writing to Make a Difference: 25 Powerful Techniques to Boost Your Community Impact. Today we pick up where Dalya left off in Part 1.]

lady benefitsIn Part 1 of this article, we discussed both tangible and intangible benefits that your organization provides.  Now I want to ask you: How can you find out more about your constituents’ intrinsic motivations for being involved with your organization?

We know of many ways to gather this information, including simple focus groups, surveys, and observation (see HERE). In the process, you may discover benefits of your service or product that you had overlooked. For instance, constituents may be using your work in ways that you were unaware of. You can then integrate your new knowledge into your growing reader databank.

Once you have some clarity about their relevant needs and interests, you can tailor your messages to emphasize the benefits that are most meaningful. Identifying and promoting the benefits of your product or service also help to further establish your organization’s brand. That is, the benefits you offer should align well with your intended image in your readers’ minds.

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Sometimes your readers will be very interested in the specific features of your service or product, and somewhat suspicious if you only focus on benefits. If that is the case, respect their need to know and give them the data they need to make up their own minds. Explain how and why the features of your organization’s service or product can lead directly to the benefits your readers might seek. This situation exemplifies the importance of knowing your readers.

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What if you know your reader is comparing two or more similar products or services with similar benefits? In that case you may want to talk about individual features that set you apart from others. Chances are good, though, that if you can identify a particular set of benefits that you alone can offer, the relevant features will help back you up.

Remember that not all your readers will come to your work as individuals. Some of them will represent other organizations, and may have slightly different concerns.

Ask_yourselfAsk yourself: What benefits would they need to be aware of to make a case for engaging with you? And what would hold them back?

All of these concerns should be on your mind as you write for these intended readers.

Example

Let’s say that your reader works at a funding institution or an organization that works in a field closely related to yours, and is concerned about the issue or challenge your organization addresses. Then, she stumbles upon your document.

She would be interested in learning about your work in terms of benefits to her and her organization, such as how it will:

  • Fit with her overall mission and strategic direction
  • Work in conjunction with other things she already has or does
  • Help her fulfill her responsibilities to her community
  • Help her avoid a negative outcome
  • Make her look good in the eyes of her supervisor, colleagues, and/or stakeholders

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Interestingly, many marketers have found that people will reward you if you slightly understate, but then over-deliver on, your promise of features or benefits. If your readers are pleasantly surprised, they will come back for more.

 

Are you listing all the benefits you offer? (Part 1)

[Dalya’s Note: This is an excerpt from my award-winning book Writing to Make a Difference: 25 Powerful Techniques to Boost Your Community Impact.]

lady benefitsYou probably have noticed that most people who get involved with community-benefit organizations like yours are not looking only for a material benefit to themselves. Sure, they may be interested in the tangible things you can offer them. And they obviously value the work you do in your community. But they are also interested in the psychological and emotional benefits they can gain because of the nature of your work.

This fact defines socially responsible organizations, and you should take it seriously. It can help position your work in the forefront of your readers’ minds.

Your organization’s vision and mission will point you toward uncovering the many unique benefits you offer your clients and customers. For more about how to use your mission in that way, see Chapter 11, “Spotlight your mission repeatedly.”

To start you down this path, I have listed some sample types of benefits, both tangible and psychological/emotional, that your organization may offer to different constituencies. In the list below, I have divided constituents into two categories, but they may overlap at your organization. The asterisks denote benefits that appear in both categories. See how many apply to your work or to any particular aspect of it. Of course, your particular organization will offer many others.

Tangible Benefits

  • A convenient opportunity, despite their hectic lives, to make a difference in their community
  • A chance to serve as a community resource—to share their good fortune or give something back in a way that matters to them
  • Small gifts or subscriptions
  • Special recognition for their involvement or accomplishment
  • Tax deduction or rebate
  • Access to unique expertise that addresses a key problem in a socially responsible manner
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Interactions with other people with whom they share values, beliefs, concerns, and struggles
  • New skills and/or understanding
  • Preparation for the future
  • Improved health and well-being
  • Risk or cost reduction
  • Safety for family, friends, or community
  • Time savings

Psychological/Emotional Benefits

  • A sense that they are part of a winning team that is making the world a better place
  • Feelings of being kind, generous, trustworthy, helpful, important, conscious, and contributing citizens
  • Improved morale, excitement, or inspiration
  • The knowledge that they are doing their part to solve a problem that directly or indirectly affects them
  • The knowledge that they are empowering themselves and others to make their own decisions
  • Increased confidence
  • Feelings of personal dignity

Keep these factors in mind when you are trying to understand your readers (that is, “get inside their heads”). If your written pieces acknowledge and support these needs in your readers, you will be on the way to instilling a sense of your organization as an important part of their lives.  You can do that by naming these benefits whenever they come up, or at least implying their presence.

Examples

1) A wealthy donor is interested in contributing financially to his community on a global level, but is unclear about how to go about it. Let’s say that your organization is involved in international work focusing on women and girls, and you want to reach out to this reader. How would you do it?

In a letter to him, you would touch on the benefits—both tangible and psychological or emotional—that he would receive from investing in you and your partners overseas. Depending on what you know about the person, you may mention things like:

  • Your organization hopes to offer him the opportunity to make a difference in the lives of women and girls around the world by partnering with the experts on your team
  • Your organization has a great track record of success stories
  • His generosity now is a way for him to “give something back” and “do his part” by empowering others and helping prepare them to join our global community
  • By joining your circle of donors, he will be able to meet regularly with others who share his commitment
  • Your organization is a registered nonprofit and all gifts are tax-deductible

2) Your organization’s products—t-shirts made of organic cotton and sewn in factories certified to be sweatshop-free—display award-winning local artwork that is silk-screened by a union shop using soy-based inks. Your prices are competitive with other high-quality t-shirts that sport none of these special features.

I am sure you can name several of this product’s many benefits for the individual consumer, the community, and the environment!

(See Part 2 of this article: HERE)

Workshop on 8/5: Great Grant Proposals

grant proposalNeed to begin or polish a great grant proposal for your nonprofit? Learn to “sell” your work to foundation and corporate funders by focusing on your matching interests and goals, and how best to tell them your story. You’ll walk away from this interactive class with new grantseeking skills and confidence.

In this workshop you will learn to:

  • Use an effective system for planning your grant proposal before you write (2P2R)
  • Engage funders with a variety of professional techniques
  • Clearly review Requests for Proposals

We will also review samples and cover resources for your next steps. Please come with a project/organization in mind!

This workshop includes a copy of Dalya’s 2011 book, Writing to Make a Difference: 25 Powerful Techniques to Boost Your Community Impact.

Please join us Monday, August 5 from 9:30am-12:30pm! Sign up HERE.

4 Must-Have Messages – Part 2

megaphone[Dalya’s Note: This blog post was originally published 5/14/13 by Nancy Schwartz, Strategist-Speaker-Consultant GettingAttention.org. Nancy Schwartz (nancy at nancyschwartz.com) helps nonprofits succeed through effective marketing. For more guidance like this, subscribe to her e-updateToday we pick up where Nancy left off in Part 1.]

3. Key Messages or Talking Points

Value

Succinctly elaborate on your positioning statement and provide the necessary proof required for validation, while enabling you to tailor your messaging to specific groups within your network.

Definition

A set of four to six key messages that build on the information conveyed in your positioning statement and respond to most common questions asked by your current and prospective network.

Most talking points should run no more than two sentences. Develop a set at the organizational level first; and follow (if needed) with sets for specific target audiences, programs and/or campaigns.

Be prepared with supporting points (a.k.a. proof points) for each talking point.

How to Use

  • Use in both written and verbal conversation.
  • However, talking points do not represent the exact words that must be used (especially in conversation), but rather convey the essential ideas to be conveyed. They can be customized for greater impact–to the specific interchange, the interests of the person you’re speaking with or emailing, and/or the topic of conversation.

Examples

Note proof points associated with the talking points in some of these examples.

  •  Advancing Equality
  • Beverage Container Recycling
  • Walk to School

4. Elevator Pitch Catch

From the moment the first elevator sped upwards in 1853, people have been polishing their elevator pitches. The idea was that if the big prospect ever strode into your elevator, you’d be able to dazzlingly explain your organization and your role there by the time you reached your floor.

But that traditional elevator pitch is dead!  Here’s why, and guidance on how to persuade people to give, volunteer and support your cause today:

1) Today, we work constantly to move people, not just the prospect and not just in the elevator. We’re working to persuade fans, colleagues, our children and friends—who are all overwhelmed by media and messages—all the time. It’s a tough sell.

2) Your conversational partner—or child, program participant, colleague or board member—doesn’t care what you want. She cares mainly about her own needs, wants, passions, habits and dreams, and those of her near and dear.

It’s not selfish, it’s human. We have to filter somehow.

If your pitch relates, great. If not, nada. And the only way to find that match—if there is one—is to a) get attention, b) learn about what’s important to your partner.

Value

Enables you to listen and learn from any social contact (not just those that take place in an elevator). If there’s interest in your issue and/or org, you can turn it into a “first step” conversion opportunity (asking for more information, scheduling a call, etc.) in 60 seconds or less.

Definition

A conversation customized to the interests of the person you’re talking with, the context of your conversation and the first-step “ask” you’ll be making and/or other factors. Takes no more than 60 seconds to deliver; 30 seconds is ideal.

These are the four steps to get there. Start with step one and end with step four, but the order of steps two and three can vary:

  1. The lead-in. This is where you introduce yourself and your role in your organization to set up the conversation. It’s intended to spark the interest of the person you’re speaking with.
  2. The question. This is the hook, an open-ended conversation that allows you to assess the interest level of your conversational partner. Remember to pause after you ask, to wait for an answer.
  3. The differentiator. Proceed here only if you get interest in response to your question. Your differentiator identifies your organization as providing a unique resource valued by the person you’re speaking with (build from what you’ve heard), one that deserves immediate attention.
  4. The first-step call to action. This is the request to schedule a follow-up call to discuss the matter further, make an online contribution or participate in a meeting on the issue, thereby making the conversion. Make it specific, clear and doable (e.g. don’t ask too much, especially in an initial conversation).

NOTE: It’s vital that the “pitcher” is adept at following the lead of his conversational partner to make the most of the short period he has. Role playing is a proven way to build this skill.

Examples

Hi, I’m Mora Lopez. I’m a senior at Santa Fe High School and a volunteer with Open Door. We host workshops at our school so that adults can learn English. We’re the only free adult ESL class in town.

Do you know that out of the 30 million adults who are below basic reading and writing levels, almost 40% are Hispanic? PAUSE, continue only if there’s clear interest.

Our participants report back that learning English has made a remarkable difference in their lives, both professionally and personally, and we want to grow the number of students we can handle.

Would you like to share your email address? That way we can keep you posted on the program as it continues to grow.

Now It’s Your Turn—Next Steps

Your next step is to inventory your organization’s current message platform against this checklist:

  • What elements are in place as defined above (or near enough)?
  • For those that are in place, were they created based on the four “must-dos” outlined at the beginning of this article?
    • If yes, you have some of the four cornerstones already in place.
    • If no, you’ll need to start at the very beginning, with your positioning statement.
  • For those cornerstones you need to revise, or create for the first time:
    • Start with clarifying your communications goals.
    • Identify those you need to engage to meet those goal, and get to know them.
    • Start shaping your cornerstones based on this framework.

What’s holding you back from effective messages?

4 Must-Have Messages – Part 1

megaphone[Dalya’s Note: This blog post was originally published 5/14/13 by Nancy Schwartz, Strategist-Speaker-Consultant GettingAttention.org. Nancy Schwartz (nancy at nancyschwartz.com) helps nonprofits succeed through effective marketing. For more guidance like this, subscribe to her e-update.]

The 4 Cornerstones of Your Nonprofit Message Platform

Creating engaging messages requires a minor (if any) financial investment and a moderate investment of time, and offers tremendous returns. I hear from so many of you who believe in the power of messages, but just don’t know where to start. In response to your requests, here’s an updated guide to crafting the four cornerstones of your organization’s messages—your message platform.

4 Must-Dos Before You Shape Your Message Platform

Take these four steps to ensure relevancy, the essence of messages that connect.

  1. Build your message team of colleagues, leadership, volunteers and supporters. You’ll want their insights to shape your messages, their relationships to test them and access to their networks by training them as fantastic messengers down the line.
  2. Clarify your top one to three marketing goals—how will you use marketing to reach your organizational goals, and the actions you want folks to take to get you there.
  3. Identify who is most likely to act and/or has the greatest influence (your target audiences; no more than three groups).
  4. Get to know what’s important to your audiences (wants, values and preferences) so you can articulate what’s in it for them and ensure no barriers stand in your way to engaging them, and learn how best to reach them.

The 4 Cornerstones of a Relevant Nonprofit Message Platform

Now you’re ready to draft, or refine, your organization’s messages.  These four components are the cornerstones of your organization’s message platform.

Be aware that although these elements are presented in a linear manner here, the message development process is cyclical. For example, what you learn in building out your key messages and related support points may highlight an element that needs to be incorporated into your positioning statement. Design your timeline, and roles and responsibilities, for this process with that in mind.

1. Tagline

Value

Extends your organization’s name to convey its unique impact or value with personality, passion and commitment, while delivering a memorable and repeatable message to your network.

Definition

Running no more than eight words, the tagline is your organization’s single most used message.

An effective tagline provides enough insight to generate interest and motivate your reader/listener to ask a question, without providing too much information so that she thinks she knows everything she needs to and doesn’t want to read more or continue the conversation.

How to Use

Exactly as written in print, online and verbal communications, including business cards and email signatures.

Examples

  • Organization: Community Food & Justice Coalition
  • Tagline: Food for People, Not for Profit
  • Organization: Maryland SPCA
  • Tagline: Feel the Warmth of a Cold Nose

2. Positioning Statement

Value

Connects your organization with those you want to engage by 1) linking it with what’s important to them; and 2) differentiating it from others competing for their attention, time and dollars.

Definition

A one to three sentence statement that positions your organization most effectively in the environment in which you work. It conveys the intersection of what your organization does well, what it does better and differently than any other organization (uniqueness), and what your network cares about.

Key components of your positioning statement are:

  • What you do.
  • For whom (whom do you serve).
  • What’s different about the way you do your work.
  • Impact you make (something tangible, like a stat, is compelling here, see example below).
  • Unique benefit derived from your programs, services and/or products.

Most, importantly, this is not your mission statement. Your mission statement is internally oriented and serves as your organizational road map. Your positioning statement connects your mission with what’s vital to your network, so must be externally oriented.

How to Use

Exactly as written in all print and online communications (with the exception of the occasional narrowly-focused flyer or mini-site).

Examples

  • The Environmental Health Coalition (EHC) builds grassroots campaigns to combat the unjust consequences of toxic pollution, discriminatory land use, and unsustainable energy policies. Through leader development, organizing and advocacy, EHC improves the health of children, families, neighborhoods and the natural environment in the San Diego/Tijuana region.
  • The Rural Women’s Health Project (RWHP) designs and delivers health education training and materials to help rural women and their families strengthen their understanding of critical health and family issues. By blending innovative techniques with a collaborative approach, RWHP has built a record of success in improving the health and well-being of the communities they serve.

(See Part 2 of this article: HERE)